Writing my first novel – Broadway Star

March 14, 2011

BROADWAY STAR – A Star is Born

Let the adventure begin! I am about to embark on my biggest project ever. As part of my Masters degree research project I am writing a novel based on a true story. I’m really excited about writing this book but at the same time I’m very nervous because it is a book based on history and I have no idea how to go about writing a story that happened in an era I know very little about.  This is where I get to fine tune my research skills! And if it’s one thing I’m very good at, it’s asking questions, questions and more questions!

I am interviewing my main character over the weekend. I interviewed her a few years ago when I was so inspired by her amazing story. So I have a whole bunch of notes and photographs already. It’s quite exciting! The first thing I’ve been doing over the past few months is reading as much information as I can get as a setting for my book.

So what have I done so far you may ask? I had put together a book proposal as part of my publishing unit late last year, complete with chapter breakdowns and a marketing proposal, etc. However, as I want the book to appeal to as large an audience as possible, I’ve now created a more dramatic and intriguing storyline incorporating fiction with non-fiction, thrown in some adversaries and of course the secret ingredient… can you guess?

Well, of course I’m not going to tell you all about it because I want you to keep reading my blog and join me in this journey of writing a novel. I have a lot to learn and hopefully we can teach each other and inspire each other along the way, so please send me your comments and poke me if the blogs are falling behind. It may be a sign that I’m having a nervous breakdown and need a pep talk to keep me focussed and moving forward!

Stay tuned!

The Inspiration for Broadway Star. Do you know this woman?

The Inspiration for Broadway Star. Do you know this woman? Photo used with permission.

Attack the Block review

December 9, 2011

Set in the shady streets of London, Sam, a young nurse played by Jodie Whittaker is walking home after dark when she is surrounded by thugs who mug her and push her to the ground.  The thugs are a street gang of bored teens, looking for some action, and lead by the hardened Moses who lives with his often absent Uncle.

As the thugs are harassing Sam, an alien falls from the sky and smashes into a car. Sam makes a run for it as Moses takes the opportunity to raid the car for goods. What he finds instead is an alien that rips into his face sending him into a rampage to kill the beast. Successful, they drag the beast through the streets and into the apartment of the local drug dealer, the same apartment that Sam happens to live in.

Although the storyline is weak,  and there are too many characters to make sense of where they fit in,  the point of the film is that Moses’ gang go from terrorising anyone on their block that they think shouldn’t be there, to having to defend their block from aliens. The hunters become the hunted as the aliens seek revenge for the death of their female counterpart. Anyone who has come in contact with the slain alien wears its scent and is a target for the hairy bear-sized alien beasts with their fluro green razor-sharp teeth. They have no eyes, tracking down their victims by scent. One by one the gang members and drug dealers are ripped to pieces as the beasts search for the female carcass. Watching each member have their throat ripped out or their head crushed and mutilated escalates the tension as more and more aliens drop from the sky and surround the block.

Moses, played by John Boyega takes command of the screen and is well cast as the angry, restless gang leader. His performance is natural and convincing. He is well supported by Alex Esmail, who plays Pest, and Luke Treadaway who plays Brewis, the drugged out teen, whose connection in the plot of the story is unclear. His sole purpose seems to be to provide comic relief which is well married with the growing tension the shrieking aliens create throughout the film.

The film is well directed, set in darkness and the confines of a sterile, low class apartment block. The stand out scene is watching Moses, with the female carcass strapped to his back, run from the pack of beasts who are snapping at his heels. The scene is in slow motion through the corridors of the apartment and surreally created with a spot-on soundtrack.

Attack the Block will keep you entertained visually. Don’t expect to understand the London babble shooting out of potty mouths at a hundred miles an hour. There are snippets of funny quotes well delivered by some fine young actors. Watch it if you’re tough!

Jacq’s rating:  4 out of 5

Director: Joe Cornish
Producer: Nira Park and James Wilson
Screenplay: Joe Cornish
Cast: John Boyega, Jodie Whittaker and Alex Esmail
Duration: 88 mins
Genre: Comedy | Sci-Fi
Classification: MA
Language: English
Country: UK | France

Whistleblower Film Review

November 3, 2011

Rachel Weisz is brilliant as Kathryn, a US cop whose dedication and commitment to her job results in her losing custody of her daughter. She is offered a high paying 6 month post working for the UN in Bosnia which changes the course of her life. She is the only woman on the force working amongst hard-nosed men who have little regard for women. Her excellent work protecting the rights of Muslim women is noticed by Madeline, played by Vanessa Redgrave, who offers Kathryn a promotion to Head of Department.

Kathryn’s bull-headed determination to investigate, what appears to be, discrepancies with how cases are handled begins to create tension with her colleagues. It isn’t long before things begin to unravel when Kathryn discovers that the girls from a local bar are part of a human trafficking business. The girls, held against their will are brutally beaten, drugged and tortured. What Kathryn uncovers puts her life in danger and has huge international implications for the persecution of high officials employed as peacekeepers.

The film is action packed from start to finish and keeps you on the edge of your seat. The brutality is severe, making the facts that this is also a reality for 2.5million victims of human trafficking difficult to conceive and devastating to accept. The atmosphere created by the bleak and colourless location accurately reflects the lives of those trapped in its existence.

Rachel Weisz’s performance is exceptional. Her eyes speak volumes. The viewer is swept along Kathryn’s journey at such a rapid pace that it is easy to be caught up in Kathryn’s frustration, and the compassion she feels for the young girls whose fear of the brutal treatment by their captors outweighs their courage to try to escape.

It is a disturbing and stressful film to watch because of the truth of the facts. It is brilliantly written and directed by Larysa Kondracki. The film is an amazing achievement as her directorial debut. Also of high standard is the cinematography work of Kieran McGuigan, and brilliant editing by Julian Clarke. It is a film worth seeing and one that will be etched in your mind permanently. There are many reasons to see this film, the most important is for the awareness it brings to human trafficking and the exposure of the people who are paid to protect. If youth won’t listen to the advice of their parents, they may pay attention to what happens in this film.

Jacq’s rating: 4 out of 5

Director: Larysa Kondracki
Producer: Amy Kaufman, Christina Piovesan, Celine Rattray
Screenplay: Larysa Kondracki, Eilis Kirwan
Cast: Rachel Weisz, Vanessa Redgrave, Monica Bellucci
Duration: 112 mins
Genre: Drama
Classification: MA
Language: English
Country: USA

Norwegian Wood Film Review

November 3, 2011

Norwegian Wood is hauntingly poignant. What saves it from being a completely depressing film are the beautiful actors. The love triangle between Rinko Kikuchi (award winner for Babel) who plays Naoko, Ken’ichi Matsuyama as Toru Watanabe, and Kiko Mizuhara’s film debut as Midori is complicated to say the least.

The film is set in Tokyo in 1967 amidst the contrast of rioting students, and students involved in recreational activities dressed in pristine creaseless white shirts, possibly depicting innocence and purity. This image is quickly shattered by the unexplained suicide of young Kizuki, Naoko’s soul mate since they were three years old.

Visually, the film appears dreamlike as if the lens is masked with a filter with some scenes more blurred than others. The nature scenes, however, appear clear and precise, such as the water droplets on a leaf. The story revolves around the seasons beginning with the spring rains and progressing through to the bitter end of winter, and returning back to spring and new beginnings.

I felt that the character’s emotions were always at a level of depression or sadness so that when tragedy struck it was difficult for the viewer’s emotions to climax and feel the anguish of the character because the viewer is strung along on this depressive ride without relief for so long that any feelings of sympathy for the characters are simply burnt out. It also makes the outcome predictable defusing any surprise or shock that may have occurred had the characters experienced a change in level of emotion.

Toru’s character lacks strength and vitality making him appear whimpy and submissive. He trails behind Naoko like an obedient puppy as she marches forcefully ahead of him in a bizarre ritual that appears as non verbal ranting. Midori holds the same power over him as she tells him what she expects a man to do to prove his love for her, basically saying that a man needs to be at her beck and call. Toru seems to be at everyone’s beck and call as he succumbs to his roommate, Nagasawa’s suggestion to find girls to sleep with during their drunken weekends. He sleeps with Naoko when she asks him to on her 20th birthday and he sleeps with Naoko’s minder, Reiko, when Reiko tells him, ‘It has to be done.’ This is after he tells Midori that he considers himself an honest man and that he loves Naoko but will commit to Midori once he frees himself from his responsibility. The web of lies continues as he tells Naoko, when she questions him about whether he is seeing someone else in Tokyo, that he isn’t.

Norwegian Wood apparently is the polite term for ‘cheap wood’ which may explain the disposability of morals. It also ties in with the Beatles song whose lyrics tie in with the girl using the boy and explains why Naoko breaks down crying when the song is sung by her minder, Reiko.  I don’t know if I can agree to Norwegian Wood being a love story because there seems to be confusion of what love is by all the characters. Toru seems convinced that he deeply loves Naoko even though deep down he wonders whether she is just using him to try to figure out her sexual frustrations and dismiss the guilt she seems to feel over the suicide of her first love Kizuki. Did he commit suicide because of the sexual frustrations he experienced with Naoko? Viewers are left wondering.

The story seems more about lust than love. It could have been cut by at least 45 minutes as the emotional drain was becoming unbearable. Because the film is an adaptation of a book based on the emotional journeys of three young inexperienced people, it would be impossible for the film to fully explain the feelings of these characters. Midori did not appear the confident girl, she simply was not mourning a devastating loss. She was every bit as vulnerable, insecure and broken as a teenager transitioning into her twenties.

As far as performances, Rinko Kikuchi far outweighed newcomer Kiko Mizuhara in her debut role as Midori. It was obvious that Kiko was chosen for her looks as her performance was bland and unconvincing. She is without a doubt irresistibly cute but lacks the acting skills to pull off the complex performance required for this story. Ken’ichi Matsuyama did little to impress. His final emotional breakdown seemed forced and drawn out and didn’t quite evoke the desired result that could have won the audience over. His passive nature made him quite the bore well depicted at the beginning of the film when he took to reading books to deal with his grief.

There is no doubt that director, Tran Anh Hung created some beautiful moments in the film. The task of recreating what appears to be a very complex story is a credit to him. The Beatle’s song, Norwegian Wood is the glue that holds the film together and about the only thing that sticks to your mind long after you’ve left the cinema.

Jacq’s rating: 2.5 out of 5

Director: Tran Anh Hung
Producer: Chihiro Kameyama
Screenplay: Tran Anh Hung, based on the novel by Haruki Murakami
Cast: Rinko Kikuchi, Ken’ichi Matsuyama, Kiko Mizuhara
Duration: 133 mins
Genre: Drama/Romance
Classification: MA
Language: Japanese
Country: Japan

Writing my first novel – Writer’s Block

September 7, 2011

Writer’s Block – Broadway Star

I know you haven’t heard from me in a while but I can assure you I’ve had my head down and nose in the books and my eyes have turned square from staring at the computer screen. I have information overload and so many notes I’ve actually forgotten half the info!

Starting the book has been tricky and I suffered my first case of writer’s block (usually I can’t stop writing) because I wasn’t sure how the information I’d collected so far would all piece together. There were too many gaps and of course my subjects couldn’t remember much about what was going on when they were young or exact dates. I had no idea how I was going to sort it all out into chronological order, until…

Finally… a major breakthrough in my research. Archived newspapers! These have been incredibly invaluable in helping to me get accurate information on what shows Alf was presenting and in which town. In some cases it listed the cast member’s names and a review of the performances. It also mentioned the seating capacity of the De Luxe waterproof marquee and the price of tickets and where to purchase them from. Fantastic stuff! The newspapers also contain valuable information in regards to what was going on at the time and the advertisements give me a good indication as to the products and services available in those days and the price of goods and services. These findings are going to help me immensely in making sure that my writing has authenticity and is certainly giving me a really good feel for that era.

I was surprised at just how much information you could get from newspapers. Some of course are quite old and hard to read but it’s worth the effort. I’ve found out a whole heap of stuff. It’s quite amazing really that you could get so much information about someone so long ago. Imagine what it’s like now with the social media networking we now have. You really do need to be careful what you put out there because it’s going to be out there for EVER!

The newspaper archives are the cement that will bind my work together. It is going to be immensely valuable in filling in all the gaps.

AWESOME STUFF!

Alf’s Academy Ad 1931

Writing my first novel – Research, research, research!

April 13, 2011

BROADWAY STAR – Research, research, research!

Librarians are angelic beings with unfathomable knowledge on how to find just about anything in the bottomless pit of books, information, resources, links, interlibrary loans, and nooks and crannies of cyberspace library heaven. Thank you, Kate, from Helensvale library for being so wonderful! Kate helped me find so many sources that I would not have found on my own. Librarians are truly worth their weight in gold.

I am now knee deep in more books and DVDs, and loving it. Life without books would be tragic! I need to create characters from an era I know nothing about. I need to visually put myself back in that era, smell the smells, feel the elements, taste the (preservative-free?) food, hear the sounds, and get a spiritual feel for the atmosphere. I need a time machine. I need a vivid imagination that can travel in time. How do I do this? I’m a very visual person so for me I like to watch films, documentaries, look at photos, and the very best option is to talk to people. The library is the most fantastic source of information. Yes, Google is also wonderful but nothing beats a library and that includes librarians.

I did get to interview my leading lady again, and her brother. It was wonderful to hear their stories and see them come to life when they told them. It certainly gave me a sense of what life was like for them and helped me get a better picture of their parents. I still have quite a bit of work to do to recreate what they can’t remember because they were too young at the time. Actually, the more I learn from these colourful characters, the more I realise that their story will stand alone. I realise that the hardest part will be to get Chapter One done because this is the chapter that I need to recreate with limited information. My library resources are going to be a very valuable so there’ll be lots more note-taking in the next few weeks. I’ve already changed the first paragraph to Chapter One numerous times. It really is the most imperative part of a book. I need to convince the reader that my book is worth reading to the end. No matter how great my story sounds verbally if I don’t hook the reader in the first few paragraphs, or pages for some generous readers, then I’m a ‘goner.’ And if it doesn’t sound authentic to the era then ‘Ciao, baby’ is all I’m going to get, so I need to get it right!

Mmmm, quite a challenge. But, I’m certainly up for it. I’m so excited. I’m like a kid in a lolly shop, except the lollies are books! Don’t screw your nose up, books have no calories and are much better for you!

So, it’s back to work. Cheerio!

Interview with Shirley and John

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Writing my first novel – Chapter One

April 3, 2011

Broadway Star – Chapter One

I thought I’d start on chapter one this week considering I had it all worked out in my head and I had to start sometime. So, first things first, I typed out Chapter One in nice font and made it look all official. Then I thought, ok, how do I get what’s in my head down on paper (computer screen actually). I write the first line and it doesn’t look right. I stare at it wondering why when it occurs to me that I have my scriptwriting hat on which is just not going to work. I think to myself ‘This is going to be a bigger challenge than I thought.’ I have to train myself to think ‘novel’. This means that I have to remember to describe everything to the reader. They need to be able to visualise the clothes, the surroundings, the era that the story is set. When you watch a film this is all explained by the visual presentation. I realise that I’m going to have to work harder, more research, more questions.

An hour later, I’ve only written 42 words which I’ve already changed numerous times. I’ve looked up names for the era, fashions, made up a table of contents for my ‘notes’ document, got distracted with a few emails that came in, got myself a glass of wine and now I’m sleepy and it’s after 11pm.

Ok, I made some adjustments and am now up to 86 words. I’m going to need a good editor because I’m already picking up mistakes with my tense.

It’s now 11.35pm and I’m super tired and have only written 99 words, 101 if you include Chapter One and of course excluding this blog. I think I’m going to be finished this book by 2050. Working full-time is a pain in the butt! I need a sugar daddy or a large mysterious donation to fall out of the sky so I can do what real writers do, spend ALL DAY WRITING! That would be bliss! But back to reality… It’s time for blanket bay.

Ok, I’ve taken another look at my progress and it’s not looking good. I need to decide on the tense. There’s so much to think about really when you try to take something out of your head and turn it into a story that makes sense to everyone else.

A few days later … I’ve ordered about 12 books from the library on fashion and cars and more things I need to research! My office is looking slightly chaotic but that’s nothing new. It’s an organised mess. I’ve just added another 5 years to the release date of my book! As for chapter one, what have I done so far? Well, I’ve picked out some interesting names, dressed the characters, given them hairstyles, and set the mood. Give me a break, these things take time. They must be accurate! You wouldn’t think to rush an artist, would you? Well, writing is like painting on a canvas except you use words to create the picture and you need to blend the right words to make a great sentence, paragraph, page, story.

I look forward to sharing what the next week will bring. Hasta luego, amigos!

Do you recognise this clown? Were you in the audience? (Permission to use photo granted by Shirley Barnett)

Writing my first novel – Hunter and Gatherer

March 27, 2011

Broadway Star – Hunter and Gatherer

I had the pleasure of conducting a four-hour interview with my leading lady. What an amazing woman and what an amazing full life she’s living. She is such an inspiration to anyone wanting to live their dream by doing what they have always loved.

So where am I up to you may ask? Well, I have hours of transcribing to do and thanks to a wonderful thing called Dragon Naturally Speaking, I was able to mic my mysterious lady up and have her speak into my Dictaphone. I’ve now downloaded the interview into my computer and am left to tidy it up. Less time-consuming but still involves some work. I also filmed our interview.

So, why is she a mystery lady you ask? Because a mystery is always fun to solve and I’m hoping to get some interaction from you out there in cyberspace. Get on board this journey by writing back to me. Can you guess who she is? I will keep dropping clues as I go.

Ok, so I’m still hunting and gathering and fleshing out the story. In fact, I’ve just added another character who will enhance the story by being a rival so I need to update my chapter layout. Now I have to pick a new name. I have a baby name book that I use when trying to figure out character’s names because the names are very important. They have to fit the character and the era you are writing in. It would be a bit stupid having a hippie name in the 1930s so I believe names are very important. I always check the meaning of the names too.

I’m juggling a few balls – researching, reading about writing history, and transcribing. This all helps to flesh out the story and characters. It’s getting interesting. Still so many questions though. Wish I had a time machine!

Writer at work. Not a pretty sight!

Letter’s End by Wolfe Bowart

January 9, 2011

Letter’s End by Wolfe Bowart was a wonderful and refreshing experience! I spent two enjoyable hours at the Queensland Performing Arts Centre (QPAC) watching the amazing Wolfe Bowart perform his vaudeville acts, incorporating magic, juggling, acrobatics and some pretty impressive dance moves to Justin Timberlake’s, ‘Im Bringing Sexy Back. Wolfe tells the story of Letter’s End without uttering a word. The audience is taken on a magical journey via beautiful music from various cultures and eras, a kaleidoscope of colours, shadow puppetry, and special effects. The props of yesteryear add an intriguing ambience as Wolfe weaved his magic using a gramophone player; clocks; a teddy bear; an amazing bubble blowing hat that produced rainbow coloured bubbles which he proceeded to pop with a plumed fountain pen as he jumped up on tables and bounced around the stage in effortless leaps and bounds. The story of Letter’s End begins with Wolfe’s character collecting piles of parcels that fall down a chute. He collects them and proceeds to throw them into a furnace. The story unfolds as he finds old parcels that contain his beloved teddy bear and old letters and memorabilia that take him back to his childhood and to the love of his life.

I watched in awe as Wolfe’s amazing imagination mixed his live performance with interaction of himself on a film screen. Wolfe stood on the stage watching himself on the screen. Suddenly, he reached into the screen and magically pulled out flowers from the screen. It was delightful to watch and every passing moment brought more surprises and funny antics.

Letter’s End was one of the most interesting and inspirational productions I’ve watched in a long time. It is different from other shows in that it is completely unpredictable, stimulating and so much fun to watch. Wolfe’s facial expressions and body control was perfection. He had the audience laughing within minutes and pure enjoyment followed throughout the show. This wonderful show is based on the forgotten art form called Vaudeville which was a very popular form of entertainment in the late 1800s to early 1900s aimed at a family audience. Physical theatre has sadly been replaced by film and television for most children, yet the delight and amazement experienced by the children in the audience was invigorating. It was obvious that it was a unique experience for everyone and the vibe in the air was electric.

I encourage you to catch Wolfe’s show and have provided the link for upcoming performance dates. Go ahead and treat yourself to a fantastic and very affordable experience that will remain in your memory forever. Visit: http://www.spoontree.com/dates.html

Photograph used with permission from Wolfe Bowart Jan 2011

Dream Big Dreams!

January 3, 2011

Why should we bother dreaming big dreams? It seems the older we get the less we dream. Has life beaten us down to the point that we think that dreaming is a waste of time? To me dreaming is a symbol of hope and faith. Dreaming is a vision of the future that keeps us going. It gives us a reason to get up in the morning and plan our day. It’s the spark plug of our soul that puts the twinkle in our eye. The sheer pleasure of dreaming is therapeutic.

Movie makers are dreamers and those who love to watch movies are dreamers. Movies take us away from reality in a much safer way than escaping reality through drugs or alcohol. We all need to escape sometimes when life gets too stressful and dreaming is such a wonderful way to go. Even when you dream the wildest dreams that you know will never eventuate, the mere pleasure of it is enough to put a smile on your face for days, weeks or months if you continue to write the dream out in your mind like you’re writing a book.

Dreams however do come true. When you have planted a dream in your mind and water it and nurture it, it will eventually grow. You need to keep the weeds from choking it, you need to work hard on fertilising it so it grows stronger and most importantly when storms try to rip it from its roots, you need to press down hard on the soil surrounding it and protect it from being destroyed. No matter what damage has been done to it, it can be restored and come to fruition.  Dream big dreams … they are so worth the effort.

Whatever you train your mind to believe with persistence, it will eventually come to fruition. Hence, the saying; ‘Be careful what you wish for!’

What are your dreams? Which dreams have you dreamed that have come true?


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